Friday, March 13, 2009

Again, again.

I have made some more changes to the colouring (minor ones) and added 2 pages that I have just finished. I will continue to address some issues that both Nic and Justin have brought to my attention as well as whom ever else that cares to comment. In all likely hood, I may do only one further update of the comic on this here blog as I simple do not have the time for more. Thats all for now.


justintertainment said...

Looks good; there is a little more demarcation between the skin tones in the dream sequence v. the 'conscious' state. I think the coloring on the last panel of page 2 is one of my favorites thus far. The only aspect that I'm unsure about is the full color on page 4. I guess I'd like to see how it looked without the yellow and orange, but that's not a major issue I'd spend time on at the moment. Ok, done.

raighneHOGAN said...

I am going to go back and work on the skin tones a bit more. I agree about the full colour on page 4. I will be taking that out in all likely hood. Thanks again sir.